yiwenji 发表于 2022-1-21 05:10   全显示 1楼
对于这类文章，心路历程是一大重点，通过关系的一步步拓展，再通过肢体动作的亲昵、对话的改变，让整篇文章富有逻辑性，不至于突兀。
当然，如果肉戏多一些就更好了，作者文笔极佳，人物感情细腻，想必肉戏也不在话下。至于接下来的文章怎么发展，还是要看作者的安排，希望继续努力，发挥自己的能力。我也希望能看到这么棒的文章。
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